FundsforWriters - May 20, 2016 - The Biggest Error of a New Writer

Published: Fri, 05/20/16

FundsForWriters: Tips and Tools for serious writers to advance their careers!
  Volume 16, Issue 21 | MAY 20, 2016  
 
     
       
 

Message from the Editor


This is our tree house. It sits about ten feet off the ground around a hickory tree and has enough room for plenty of adults. We haven't held many parties up there yet, and the grandkids are pretty young at present to fully enjoy it with their make-believe, but it's part of my home place's personality. It's like crafting characters and not using all the details, or researching a setting and not utilizing all the information . . . it's there for future use. Occasionally I step up there just to have a different viewpoint of the lake, or the woods, or my garden. Something we might like to do at times with our writing - come at it from a different angle, just to see what it's like . . . and imagine all the what-ifs. 

PS - The shirt says, Be careful or you'll wind up in my novel. 
 

Hope Clark


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Editor’s THOUGHTS



THE BIGGEST ERROR OF A NEW WRITER

Here lately I've received a rash of emails asking me how to become a freelance writer and make money. Well, actually, they ask how they can write and get paid by me, and then they ask me to mentor them so that their writing is good enough. 

So, let's look at this for a moment . . . I'm supposed to take on someone who is not a commercial writer, teach them how to write such that it IS marketable, then pay them $50 for 500 words that fit FundsforWriters. 

Some submitters become quite disgruntled when I refuse them. Some pitch me anyway, then when I reject (always with reasons to help them learn), they get angry that I am not giving a new writer a chance by educating them how to write it better. 

Note to writers everywhere: It is not an editor's job to teach you how to write. When you pitch, you are professing to already know the craft. It should be only a matter of the writer's pitch fitting the need of the publication.

The best ways to learn how to write for a publication:

1) Read all the freelance chapters in a Writers Market.
2) Read enough of the publication you're pitching to understand their style.
3) Read the guidelines and study the editorial calendar (if available).
4) Ensure your writing is polished enough so that the editor wants to read more.
5) Know the Chicago Manual of Style.

Second note to writers: Editors are not there to edit your work for you. They are there to edit for the publication, to find the best topics for their readers and then edit the stories to fit the space. 

Take the time to learn how to write well. Then take the time to learn how to pitch smart. Do not use editors for your trial and error learning process. Find beta readers and critique groups to test drive your work. 

You cannot undo a first impression, and yes, many editors remember. An idea that doesn't quite fit is one thing....not knowing how to write is quite another. 

Freelance writing resources for the new freelance writer:

http://www.therenegadewriter.com/
http://www.makealivingwriting.com/ 
http://www.writersmarket.com/


 






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I wanted to let you know how much I appreciate all you share through FundsforWriters. Your listing for Chanticleer Book Reviews was the spark that started ongoing paying work for them with an exceptional editor. I'm already on my third assignment, looking forward to more work, and extremely happy to have made this connection.
 
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featured article


FundsforWriters to the Rescue

By Shirley Raye Redmond
 
I have been writing in my spare time for more than 40 years. My file cabinets are crammed full of research notes, ideas for future articles, and manuscripts in various stages of completion. Fortunately, I have sold many magazine and newspaper articles, as well as two dozen children’s books, but I still have quite a collection of rejected picture book and early reader manuscripts. I also have the letters stating why they were rejected in the first place.

When I wrote about Cathy Williams, the only female buffalo soldier in U.S. history, multiple editors told me she was “too obscure” to be the subject of a nonfiction picture book. I protested, pointing out that teachers and librarians are always looking for new stories for Black History Month, Women’s History Month and even Veterans Day. But no, they still weren’t interested. Cathy, they insisted, was just not marketable.

Editors also rejected my fictional children’s story, “Oh-So-Clever,” a tale inspired by the legend of a Ryukyuan prince named Sashiki, who is said to have united the island of Okinawa without bloodshed in the year 1429, using fine arts rather than martial ones. Again, I received multiple rejection letters, even though children’s book editors are always clamoring for more cultural diversity in manuscript submissions. 

When I wrote a nonfiction reader for youngsters in first through third grades about Admiral Peary returning from Greenland with the largest meteorite “in captivity,” editors deemed the subject too obscure as well — even though that particular 34-ton space rock remains on display in the Hall of Meteorites at the American Museum of Natural History in New York. Thousands of school children take field trips there each year. From a marketing aspect, it would seem like a perfect book to sell in the museum gift shop there and at other museums with meteorites on display. 

Undaunted, I retrieved these rejected manuscripts from the file cabinet and looked at them again. I decided to think outside the picture book box and transform my manuscripts into articles instead. Reasoning that if children’s book editors considered my proposed topics too obscure, then children’s magazine editors might be equally shortsighted. Instead, I decided to use my extensive research notes to transform the original manuscripts into articles suitable for adult publications, which pay more generously than children’s magazines anyway.

The market listings posted on the FundsforWriters website proved to be quite inspirational. 

To my delight, the editor at Rural Missouri, (http://ruralmissouri.coop/submissions.php) the state where Cathy Williams was born and raised, promptly bought my article, “The Buffalo Soldier’s Secret.” It appears in the November 2014 issue.

The Elks Magazine (https://www.elks.org/elksmag/WritersGuidelines.pdf) bought first North American serial rights to the Robert Peary meteorite article, as well as the one about the amazing globetrotting photographers, Osa and Martin Johnson — another topic I had hoped to pursue for a children’s book. This article appears in the May 2015 issue. 

“Oh-So-Clever” sold to the Center for Education Testing and Evaluation at the University of Kansas — a market mentioned in one of the weekly Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators electronic newsletters (https://cete.submittable.com/submit) that I receive each week. The center administers a variety of standardized tests and continues to accept submissions for poetry, informational and narrative texts suitable for students in grades 3-12.

I have been successful in recycling this first batch of manuscripts and will retrieve another handful from the file drawer with the intention of giving them a makeover as well. I simply need to shift mental gears and think imaginatively outside the box — and review the market listing at FundsforWriters again.

BIO-
Shirley Raye Redmond writes in Los Alamos, New Mexico and is a former columnist for the Santa Fe New Mexican. Visit her website at www.shirleyrayeredmond.com

 

COmpetitions


UNDER THE GUM TREE CONTEST
http://www.underthegumtree.com/contest
$20 ENTRY FEE.
The theme of this contest is (un)seen/(un)heard. For this contest, we are particularly interested in true stories, articulated in any form (straight-ahead narrative, lyric, modular, etc.), that invite us as readers and people into a space, experience, examination, or contemplation that brings us closer to our raw, complex, and varied humanity/ies, and challenges us to deeper authenticity with ourselves and fuller empathy toward others. Deadline June 30, 2016. Limit 5,000 words. One winner will receive a modest $300 (and more, if submission fees permit!), publication in our January 2017 issue, and a one-year subscription to keep or gift.



THE PAZ PRIZE FOR POETRY
http://thecenteratmdc.org/site/programs/paz_prize_intro.html
NO ENTRY FEE.
The award recognizes a previously unpublished poetry book written in Spanish by a poet residing in the U.S. The winning book will be published in a bilingual edition by Akashic Press, and its author will receive a $2,000 cash prize. Deadline June 15, 2016. Length of approximately 48 pages. 



SOUTHERN WRITERS MAGAZINE SHORT STORY CONTEST
http://www.southernwritersmagazine.com/shorts.html
$15 ENTRY FEE.
First place $250, publication, year's subscription to Southern Writers. Second place $100, publication, year's subscription. Third place $50, publication and year's subscription. Ten runners up - publication and subscription. Manuscript word count 1,500 words maximum.



I MUST BE OFF CONTEST
http://www.imustbeoff.com/p/blog-page.html
NO ENTRY FEE.
It's that time of year again: time to type up those travel articles, travel anecdotes and travel reflections. If it's about travel, we want to read it. We want to read about that place that changed you.We want to read about the experiences you can't wait to share with other travelers. Maximum 1,200 words. Deadline July 31, 2016. Up to three photos may be submitted with your entry. Photos not necessary to win. The top essays will be published at I Must Be Off! (Authors retain copyright.) Second place prize: $50. First place prize: $200. Readers' Choice Award ($50) based on unique hits and comments tallied on September 30, 2016.
 

GRANTS


BINDERCON SCHOLARSHIPS
http://nyc.bindercon.com/apply-scholarship/
The Out of the Binders Scholarship Program is designed to increase diversity by offering free admission to up to 25 promising writers who might not otherwise be able to attend due to financial hardship. Diversity includes but is not limited to: age; racial, ethnic, and cultural backgrounds; sexual orientation; gender identity; marital and parental status; disability. The scholarships include free attendance to all the events on Saturday, October 29, and Sunday, October 30, networking opportunities to meet agents and editors, and a ticket to the VIP party, but do not include airfare and/or accommodations, or food. (Some meals may be provided as part of the conference programming.) Additionally, we are thrilled to offer stipends to select applicants: parents who require financial assistance with childcare and out of town attendees in need of travel assistance. Please indicate if you would like to be considered for any of these stipends. Deadline May 31, 2016. 



MEXICO RESIDENCIES
http://azarts.gov/arts-op/self-directed-instructional-artist-writers-residencies-mexico/
http://www.arquetopia.org
Arquetopia is an international award-winning, Mexican official nonprofit foundation run entirely by artists. Has many opportunities for those in the arts, to include writers, with deadline of May 29, 2016. 



AUSTRALIAN INDIVIDUAL ARTIST GRANTS
http://www.australiacouncil.gov.au/funding/new-grants-model/arts-projects-for-individuals-and-groups/
Deadlines June 7 and October 4, 2016. If you are applying as an individual or group, you must be a practicing artist or arts worker and an Australian citizen or an Australian permanent resident. Applications for funding to the Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander panel must come from Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander individuals or groups.



THE CAMBRIDGE WRITERS' WORKSHOP SCHOLARSHIPS
https://cww.submittable.com/submit/58767
https://cww.submittable.com/submit/52214
For student writers, diversity fellows, and writers who are parents. Join the CWW 2016 Summer in Barcelona and South of France Writing Retreat (July 18-26, 2016) and Summer in Granada, Spain Writing Retreat (July 28-August 5, 2016). Limited scholarships of $500-$1,500 are available for each program. Scholarships are available for student writers (for undergraduate or graduate students in literary fields), diversity fellows (for writers of color and writers from marginalized communities), and for writers who are parents. Deadline June 10, 2016. 

 

FREELANCE MARKETS



WELL FAMILY - THE NEW YORK TIMES
http://well.blogs.nytimes.com/category/family/?_r=0
http://www.nytimes.com/content/help/contact/directory.html
A new blog for news about parenting, child health and relationships, with advice also from experts to help every family live well. Pays $100. 



THE TABLET
http://www.tabletmag.com/about
Tablet is a daily online magazine of Jewish news, ideas, and culture. Tablet welcomes submissions from freelance writers. Please submit a full pitch — including a detailed description of what you’d like to write, a brief biography, links to previously published stories, and, if necessary, a short writing sample — to the appropriate section editor. Do not submit a completed piece. 



UPWORTHY
http://www.upworthy.com/pitch-us
Upworthy reaches a massive audience with meaningful stories every day, and we're looking for original stories that support our mission of creating a better world. Pays up to $200 for 500-word pieces.



TWOPLUSTWO MAGAZINE
http://www.twoplustwo.com/magazine/contribute.php
The Two Plus Two Internet Magazine accepts articles on any topic related to poker or gambling. Articles should be about 1,000-2,000 words. If accepted, we will pay a fee of $200 (per article) by the end of the month after the article appears on www.twoplustwo.com
 

JOBS



AUTUMN MAGAZINE SEEKS FREELANCER
http://azarts.gov/jobs/article-writers-autumn-magazine/
http://www.autumnmagazine.com/
Looking for someone who possesses strong writing and editing skills. Task is to write one article per month based on monthly theme. Articles are no more than 500 words per article. Examples can be seen in the digital magazine subscription of Autumn Magazine by subscribing for free at www.autumnmagazine.com/subscribe .

Writing Topics Needed:
Quizzes – based on theme for the month; Art – Poetry, critique on current movies, tv shows, are books; and Media & Culture – Opinion pieces and reports on current events unfolding in the media or apart of our culture. Apply by sending an email to jayme@autumnmagazine.com with a writing example and category of interest. Deadline May 27, 2016

 

 

publishers/agents



MIDNIGHT INK
https://www.midnightinkbooks.com/
Midnight Ink is a fresh new voice in mystery fiction committed to publishing suspenseful tales of all types: hard-boiled thrillers, cozies, historical mysteries, amateur sleuth novels, and more. Agents may submit manuscripts at any time. Authors without agents may only submit if the manuscript was requested after a face-to-face pitch made during a conference. 



CROOKED LANE BOOKS
http://www.crookedlanebooks.com/
A crime fiction imprint that publishes today’s most gripping mysteries, thrillers, and suspense novels. From high-concept thrillers and white-knuckled suspense to traditional mysteries and literary crime, our titles consistently deliver driving plots, engaging characters, and stunning twists from the most talented authors on the scene.



THE POISONED PENCIL
http://thepoisonedpencil.com/author-submissions/
The Poisoned Pencil publishes young adult mystery in trade paperback and ebook editions. We have full distribution to the trade through IPS. Our advance is $1,000.



MERCER UNIVERSITY PRESS
http://www.mupress.org/Assets/ClientPages/Submission-Guidelines.aspx
Mercer University Press seeks to publish scholarly works of excellence in
the following fields:
(1) Religious Studies, particularly Biblical Studies;
(2) Philosophy
(3) Southern Culture, particularly History of the South
(4) Fiction/Literary



HEROES & HEARTBREAKERS
http://www.heroesandheartbreakers.com/page/submissions
HeroesandHeartbreakers.com welcomes submissions of original romance stories in all subgenres (erotica, contemporary, paranormal/urban fantasy, women’s fiction/chick lit, historical, romantic suspense, etc). We are not interested in “true confessions” or other non-fiction material. We are looking for short stories (15k-30k words) as well as novellas (30k-50k words) and category-length works (up to 60k). Novellas and category-length romances would most likely be considered for publication as serials.

 

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