Hey FundsforWriters readers. This is Hope from FundsforWriters.

Last week, I told you about a free training I’m doing with expert copywriter Bryan Cohen.
It’s on Wednesday, and I wanted to make sure you had your chance to sign up. Click here
and register on the next page to join us on the webinar. 
https://bryancohen.leadpages.co/sfa-webinar-c-hope-clark/ 

I wanted to share how different your book description can look when you’ve applied Bryan’s
systems to your sales page. 

Writing strong prose is no guarantee you'll have the same skill with sales copy. I asked Bryan
to share a "before" and "after" of an author who applied his description system to her book description. 

Before: 
Clara is keeping a dark and deadly secret from William, the love of her life. Not because she
wants to hide things from him, but because her story is so unbelievable. If she tells him, she
could lose him. If she doesn’t tell him, she will. 

On an overseas airplane ride, Clara finds a ring-sized jewelry box in William's coat. Figuring
that he wants to take their relationship to the next level, Clara must decide whether or not she will
open up to him. Maybe she could find a way to live happily with him without exposing her secret. 

Before she has a chance to decide, Clara comes face to face with an old rival who holds the key
to revealing Clara's past. Will Clara be able to win over William despite the truth, or will she lose
him forever? 

After: 
Her supernatural secret could doom their love…

Clara has been lucky. She's spent countless hours with William, the love of her life, without him
finding out her dark and deadly secret. When she discovers a ring-sized jewelry box in William's
oat, she fears her relationship with the most wonderful mortal will come crashing down. 

Secrets give way to explosions and before Clara can right her wrongs, an old rival may lay her
past bare and destroy the love she holds so dear. 

Can William love her for who she really is?

Hidden Intentions is a standalone story in the Transformed Series featuring the characters of
Clara Erikson and William Lennox. If you love supernatural creatures, forbidden romance, and
fast-paced action, then you'll love Stacy Claflin's tale of paranormal romance. 

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Notice how the second version flows from point to point without getting tripped up by the plot
(like so many descriptions do). The best part about the improved version is that it's part of a
replicable system that Bryan is teaching to everybody. I recommend you join the call on
Wednesday to find out everything you can from the man himself. 

Click here and register on the next page to join Wednesday’s event! 
https://bryancohen.leadpages.co/sfa-webinar-c-hope-clark/

I look forward to chatting with you all during this week’s training. 

Sincerely, 
Hope

PS: Please remember to show up live for the event so you can join the Q&A session at the end! 
https://bryancohen.leadpages.co/sfa-webinar-c-hope-clark/