In our 2024 contest, 2,249 entries were judged by Mina Manchester with screening assistance from Sarah Halper. Ms. Manchester shares her thoughts below.
I often ask myself "What should writing do?" The winning stories and essays in this year's Tom Howard/John H. Reid Fiction & Essay Contest have answers.
The First Prize winner in Nonfiction, Lanfu Liu's essay "Memory in Tibet", is a deeply thoughtful meditation on morality. Told from the perspective of a young Chinese man who becomes a teaching assistant in Tibet, he observes the circumstances of his pupils' lives alongside a
Mandarin teacher who grieves the recent loss of her young daughter. In the essay, he wrestles with many questions, and at the end, must decide who to become.
In Nonfiction, the Honorable Mentions dwell on questions not only of how to be but of what to do. One woman is invited into a sacred community of people who wash and prepare the dead for burial, while in another essay, a young woman battles cocaine and alcohol addiction in two cities, trying to orient herself and settle in on the outcomes of different choices. A writer confronts unexpected grief after an abortion, while in another essay
a man hesitates to reveal the shame of his abusive father. A well-researched essay explores women's rage in Korea and America, and another recounts verbatim the things men have said, contrasting these quotes with support received from female relationships and pondering how to fall in love when you've been hurt over and over.
Nonfiction Honorable Mentions went to:
Clea Bierman, "Bottle Girl"—The voice in this piece is one I could listen to endlessly, for its forthrightness and confidence, even though the protagonist goes on a journey that is the opposite. This essay is the best kind of writing because even as Bottle Girl's bad decisions threatened to
take her down, I was rooting for her the whole time.
Sarah Cadorette, "I Don't Know What Possessed Me"—A woman recounts how patriarchal culture in Korea and America has repressed women's rage. The ways this anger seeks release are explored both on a cultural level and a personal level, and it's the distillation that
crystallizes this work.
Zoe Hiemstra, "Pink Matter"—This braided essay weaves together the thoughtless and often hurtful epithets men have said to the author with the feelings of love she has for both male romantic partners and female friends and family. The contrast offers a thought-provoking glimpse into
gender, relationships, coming of age, and deciding boundaries for our own experience of love.
Ilari Pass, "Washing Light"—A moving and melodic essay about a woman who is invited to wash the body of young woman who is the same age as her daughter, which slows down time to the most minuscule of observations. In this experience of preparing a body for death, this woman finds,
inexplicably, joy.
Jason Prokowiew, "The Demulcent of Shame"—A "demulcent" relieves pain, and in this essay, a man recounts how the bravery of discussing the abuse he received from his father works the same way for him. In a narrative that winds through time, the telling of these secrets, long-held,
takes away their power, and the man is transformed into a new person, one who is no longer a prisoner of shame.
Arya Samuelson, "I Am No Beekeeper"—A writer recounts her time at an artist residency, where she finds solidarity with other women artists, as well as the courage to face her lifelong fear of bees. Along the way, as she listens, shares, and learns from the others, she finds the strength to write about her
abortion.